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All about Steve Jay, Jon "Bermuda" Schwartz, Rubén Valtierra, and Jim West.

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crispy-gypsy @ Sep 1 2008, 10:17 PM wrote: "Hardcore fangirls are fat with tusks and big bushy mustaches. And the Beatles like to write music about them."

Yeah, it wouldn't work in ANY respect. *laughs* Thus, we are awesome like Raptors.
:blink: Wow... *laughs* Good thing I didn't use that example...not sure how that would have had to do with anything.... :lol: LOL

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Exactly! That's why Walruses were a bad choice, and you have proven yourself a better person by referring to us as raptors. *laughs*

Okay, I'm done with the wtf randomness. *laughs*

I am waaaaaaiting for the next chapter. *languishes*
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WELL I'M NOT GOING TO GIVE IT TO YOU!!!

*giggles* Just kidding! I'll be working on the end of the chapter some more this week. I'm finally getting to the part with the villain and the new character I told you I would introduce!! Yay!

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I changed the second chapter's name to Run! seeing that I wasn't able to fit the villain into that chapter (I'm trying to keep each chapter about 3 pages long so that I don't over do myself and I stay on target). So here's the next chapter!! Or at least a part of it :P
Listening to: Love Me Dead by Ludo (hehe, copying you Ghia *giggles*)

Chapter Three: Not Wanted

By the time Ruben had jumped into the elevator, fans had already swarmed around the doors, trying to get a picture of him. Following Ruben was no longer an option.
Steve jumped at Jim, pushing him away from a fan who was about to tackle him.
“This is worse than the concert chase in California!” Bermuda ducked, missing an out reaching arm that was trying to grab him.
“With that one, we actually had open range to run!” Al answered. “Hey, you two are getting better at this.”
Jim and Steve dodged a group of fans. “Thanks, we’re starting to get used to it.” Jim grabbed Steve’s shoulder and pushed him down.
“Say, where did Ruben go?” Steve asked, popping back up.
Jim pushed him down again. “Stay down! He got in the elevator, remember? He’s most likely safe outside getting the security.”
“I think not,” Al nodded with his head up toward the second floor where Ruben was grinning mischievously down at them.
“A little help, Ruben?” Bermuda shouted.
Ruben crossed his arms. “Hmm, the last time I remember when I tried to do anything, you all gave me a sedative.”
“We’re not going to give you one. Just please, help us!” Steve begged.
“Do I get a month’s supply of syrup?” Ruben questioned.
“Boy, he’s good.” Jim commented.
“Yes, good...but not as good as me.” Al noted. He raised an arm, pointing up at Ruben and at the top of his lungs screamed, “Look! It’s Ruben!”
All the fans looked up, letting out shrieks of delight, and ran to the elevator.
“No fair! Why’d you do that?” Ruben gave Al a betrayed look.
“You need the exercise.”
Ruben let out a yell and disappeared, running away from the fans who had reached the second level.
Steve and Jim took off, taking advantage of the fans who were detracted. They crept into a book store and before anyone saw them, entered a room marked Employee Only. The room was stocked up high with boxes full of book, but on the far side of the room there was another door which, once Jim opened it, reveled some stairs.
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Ahahahaha, "Yes, good...but not as good as me! Look it's Ruben!!!"

I love that!!! Keep going! Keep going! :D
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XD that was great!!!!!!!!!


You are the TBITB Fanfic master!!! :D
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:lol:

I love it!!
4 words that Al said to me that blew me away:

"How's Problem Child doing?" - 7/12/11

So awesome!

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Post by Lauren »

:lol:

its getting good :D :Y
big day!!!!!!!!! :D :)

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DonnaNoble @ Sep 4 2008, 10:47 PM wrote: XD that was great!!!!!!!!!


You are the TBITB Fanfic master!!! :D
:lol: You guys are crazy! I love you all!
Just for that, I'm going to dance around and come up with new story ideas...or something like that :hug:
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Post by Orthography Enthusiast »

Man, I wish I could see a video of the guys when they read this. :sly:
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