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Postby Bruce the Duck » Wed Nov 12, 2003 5:19 am

Well? Was it good? Bad? Terrible? Not worth talking about?
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Postby Elvis » Wed Nov 12, 2003 5:27 am

It was good. It's been so long since I read the other chapters, I probably missed a few references, and I'm not sure where in the story the flashback takes place (that's my fault for not going back and checking), but it's good!

I wish I knew I should have been counting songs though when I read it! :P

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Postby Bruce the Duck » Wed Nov 12, 2003 5:30 am

The flashback takes place during the first chapter, when Forrest meets Lisa on the BUS. I put in references to the events of the first chapter to place the reader in the moment, but I guess it wouldn't work as well if it's been so long since you've read the first chapter. I had to look back myself to check my own facts, so I can see how someone else would be confused! :lol:
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Postby Bruce the Duck » Tue Feb 24, 2004 7:32 pm

:lookround:
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Postby Dr eBay » Sun Feb 29, 2004 10:43 pm

Bruce the Duck @ Feb 24 2004, 12:32 PM wrote::lookround:


Yes, :lookround: indeed.

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Postby Bruce the Duck » Thu Mar 25, 2004 4:22 am

I've published my story at www.fanfiction.net. If you haven't already read it, you can do so here. It might be easier to read there than here.

Also, I am working on another fan fiction. It's a cross-over between two great British comedy series "Jeeves and Wooster" and "Blackadder." It's not Al related, but it does feature a few Al references that only Al fans would catch. I'll post it at that site when it's ready! :)
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Postby Genius in Maine » Thu Mar 25, 2004 5:43 am

:lol: Very funny story, BTD! I especially like Chapter 7. :thumbsup:
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Postby Bruce the Duck » Thu Mar 25, 2004 5:50 am

Thanks! :)
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Postby doggans » Fri Mar 26, 2004 12:55 am

Bruce the Duck @ Mar 25 2004, 12:22 AM wrote: It's a cross-over between two great British comedy series "Jeeves and Wooster" and "Blackadder."


Oh, my gosh, I LOVE Jeeves and Wooster.

And great story, I really enjoyed it. Good concept, and good delivery.
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Postby Bruce the Duck » Tue Sep 26, 2006 11:15 pm

Bruce the Duck wrote: Coming some day in the distant future......Chapter 16: Yet to be titled



Wow! It's amazing that that "distant future" is already here! It feels like yesterday, but at the same time it feels like it's been a century!

Anyway, get ready for the next chapter of "Alfred Gump!" For those of you who haven't read the other chapters, or those who've forgotten what's happened so far, I've assembled a quick and easy table of contents for reading the other parts of the story. Click away!


Chapter 16 will be posted momentarilly! :D Enjoy!
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